

Art gone postal by The Vixen
July 10th, 2007 10:35 PMAnyways, the poem just kind of appeared as I covered the unneeded words, but that's how it usually is with whiteout poems. I'll provide a more coherent form of the poem below but keep in mind: the line breaks should be ambiguous. The format I put it in is simply my own interpretation of the flow. Oh, and I'll buy a stamp tomorrow when I mail it; I'm broke so I'll have to search around for some change :(
that moment
I was caught up in the symbolism of it all,
the fact that
so visibly
those many reluctant tremors suggest
cadences of mind
searching for the most precise nuances and distinctions
sculpt a superior voice
possess those aspects that tend to lift up into
sonorous poetry
respond to the gravity of an invisible core
and journeys not expected
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Yea, I put a return address on it; I hope that they won't send it back. If they do, it would be cool to have it though because I rarely keep the hard copies of my writing or wannabe art. We'll see though.
how the hell do you get all these tasks done so quickly?
I have no life. Period. Except for the two hour a day Anthropology class at UC Berkeley and a weekend + Friday job as a temptress/hostess at Berkeley's best Italian Restaurant. You WILL come into this restaurant, won't you? (seductively reveals more of her neckline)... Being broke is a way of life.
I love doing reduction poetry! And bonus kudos for being an Anthropologist **insert secret Anthropology Major handshake here** Votes!
Are you one of those girls who shouts "buona sera!!!"
I love to just stop and talk to those girls in little Italy and learn pedestrian italian!
Nah, I can't speak italian for shit. I'm still trying to pronounce "trattoria" with the "th" sound at the beginning. Unfortunately, I tend to pronounce stuff on the menu in either a french or spanish accent. At least I'm trying :/
Hope you put a return address on that…
I once mailed a piece that size and it got returned to me…
Postcard:
• Maximum size is 6” long X 4 1/4” high
• Minimum size is 5” long X 3 1/2” high
Thats a nice mini-postcard, it would be a shame if the usps misplaced it