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Oliver X
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The Graphic Sonnet (Sonet Desinée) by Oliver X, beverly penn

June 12th, 2006 8:02 AM

INSTRUCTIONS: Perhaps other assignments will involve the squirmy (sub?)genre of the graphic novel, but here you're asked to aid the birth of a new one: the Graphic Sonnet (or Sonet Dessinée). The goal of the graphic sonneteer is to take the form of the sonnet, which has become an embarrassment, and raise it to a more ambitious and meaningful level. In doing this, you will have to consider which characteristics of the sonnet can be incorporated into graphics; for example, some formic suggestion of the number 14 seems like a very reasonable requirement. How and whether you choose to represent a rhyme scheme, or the volta, or English-vs-Italian form, etc is up to you.

We will ask you, however, to prove that you have submitted your work to a literary journal, 'zine, magazine, website, or book series (et. al) that publishes sonnets.

There were a number of ways to interpret this task, both with and without text. But as Beverly had already written a nice sonnet for this task, we decided to explore the graphical nature of type as well.

We attempted to reflect the thematic and rhyming structure of a sonnet in both imagery and type. Thus, each quatrain is represented by a pair of images, corresponding to the halves of its rhyming structure.

Beverly took the liberty of submitting this to the Twin Cities-based Rain Taxi literary journal.

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I must thank Oliver not only for his contribution, but for restraining his laughter after having read my first attempt at writing a sonnet. I am perfectly aware of its imperfections, but decided it worked well enough for the task.

Here is the text, in case you cannot quite read it below:

I claim the imperfection of your face.
I cut with words at the wicked line.
What in your life is patterned by grace
in me there runs a more vicious vine.
I drink it down, the bitter fiend's sweet draught;
into myself the question of love's greed.
A cunningly delicate yet cruel craft
that reeks of blood and breeds false need.
Your arms held care and carried my weight;
in effortless time you accomplished me.
With ease I was drowned in the water's fate
and a force of mind that could never be
my salvation; the cure for love's true lie.
One last push into water and my passions die.

- smaller


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