
15 + 15 points
Alphabet Soup by Elise
April 30th, 2007 6:34 PM
Although broken, Cathy didn't even feel general hatred. I just knowingly lowered my notes, opting past quick rationals. She told ugly variations: windbag xenophobes, yapping zealots.
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posted by Elise on April 30th, 2007 9:45 PM
there is nothing in the world like my IMB selectric.
I like this a lot. The flow is very natural; with the others, you could read and had you not known of the task, you'd be able to tell they are choosing specific words for some reason. Up until the last five words, had I not known of the task, this paragraph wouldn't seem strange at all.
Also, I love the photographs! It's very reminiscient of The Shining. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.