

15 points
Become the Author by Excelsior McGillicutty
September 21st, 2006 4:54 PM
Strangling. The voice exited his throat slumsweet and hot.
-- I'm not sure, said Jonesy, that this is going to work.
--We'll try, said the girl.
Boilingwater bubbles.
Pretty girls farting.
JONESY Fish and taters!
-- I'm not sure, said Jonesy, that this is going to work.
--We'll try, said the girl.
Boilingwater bubbles.
Pretty girls farting.
JONESY Fish and taters!
Huh, the only guess I could wager would be the later works of James Ellroy, but you don't have anything in there about abusing women, corrupt police or grisley murder scenes.
But the cadance is similar.