25 + 30 points
Religious tourist by hmrpita (Lenore)
May 28th, 2007 5:04 PM
I'm a freethinker.
My morals don't come from the
supernatural.
On May twenty-first
I attended a
Catholic Confirmation.
There was a lot of
standing up and sitting down
and some kneeling too.
I stood and I sat,
recited the Our Father,
but I did not kneel.
Only about half
of the standing room only
church took communion.
Seventy-one names
are listed in the program.
I know one of them.
My morals don't come from the
supernatural.
On May twenty-first
I attended a
Catholic Confirmation.
There was a lot of
standing up and sitting down
and some kneeling too.
I stood and I sat,
recited the Our Father,
but I did not kneel.
Only about half
of the standing room only
church took communion.
Seventy-one names
are listed in the program.
I know one of them.
6 vote(s)
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Kristen Rutherford
5Kyle Hamilton
5Burn Unit
5Ariock Knight
5Jellybean of Thark
5Caroline The Curly
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posted by hmrpita (Lenore) on May 28th, 2007 8:20 PM
I know--it's a conceit.
Maybe I will write a tanka next time. ;)
posted by Kristen Rutherford on May 28th, 2007 11:33 PM
i like your haikus
which i find quite ironic
since i don't like you.
posted by Burn Unit on May 29th, 2007 6:42 AM
I don't mind the form, either. But I worry you're too wedded to the early-American appropriation of the form: fun and formal, but too long!
fun.
even more fun.
posted by Caroline The Curly on November 12th, 2007 8:41 PM
lol, I was thinking about going to a catholic church service for this one. and I'd "take communion" except that the wafer thing would be my souvineer. dang, now I have to think of something else. *sighs* LOL good job well, I like the haiku form even if they don't
Haikus can be nice
But please, have you considered
Using other forms?