




10 points
Hey You Haiku by Roel Schuring
November 20th, 2007 12:39 AM
Hey you there big shop
Stop that capitalism
You can help the poor
Stop that capitalism
You can help the poor
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posted by teucer on November 20th, 2007 9:33 AM
It's a good haiku, but it doesn't really do what the task description says.
Now, if you sticky-note it to the manager of the store or something, you'll totally get my vote.
I quite like the Haiku.
But, the task explicitly asks you to write it out and stick it somewhere, so it can be seen by someone besides us.
I've love to see you do so. (Or, if you *have* done so, then I'd love to hear about it.)
Welcome to the game.