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This is like a teaser. Now I want to see the clock engulfed in flame or something. It's not really DESTROYED. It's mildly on fire, like a candle. Still, the clock probably doesn't work anymore, so I GUESS it's destroyed.
This completion puts mine to shame, I think. Your songs are of decent length, and they're all serious. You could make a CD of these songs, and it would be a coherent album, I think. My absolute favorite is #5. It just makes me happy. Second favorite is #9. Yay for formulas like the blues! It makes our jobs easier. Also, I just want to say I enjoyed the page turns. :D
I think this is cool! And I'm sure you got the heaviest paper clips available...
You must have good circulation. I'm pretty sure if I tried to do that, my toes would turn black and fall off in winter.
Not to be a downer, but there IS a task called "Sunset." Why not submit this completion under that task instead?
Someday I will muster enough discipline to truly learn to play guitar. I'm glad you liked the song though!
And to everyone else, you have boosted my self confidence in terms of my songwriting +10 at least. Thanks for kind comments and votes!
I feel super special for being on the first page for the first time ever! Lucky me. Thanks for painting me.
However, this vote isn't just because I'm flattered. I really like the commissioning idea. Bribery gets things done!
I wish the anthem were a BIT more singable, but hey, the United States National Anthem is less singable than this...
The smiley face gets the vote. Sometimes improvisation is necessary. Plus the world needs more smiles. :)