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Møuse
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Small Changes Make A Big Difference by Møuse

September 24th, 2006 6:47 PM

INSTRUCTIONS: Take an artwork that you did not make and alter it in a subtle way so that the meaning of the piece is changed in a significant way.

Show us the differences and your intended consequences.

This task has plagued my mind like the last segment of an orange that no one wants, yet you cant bring yourself to throw away. Originally i leapt into it with glee sorting through several of my favourite paintings for something that would inspire me.

I thought i was onto a cracker when i remembered Sir Francis Dicksee's painting of Keats' poem "La Belle Dame Sans Merci". Without hesitation i began the long process of changing ownership of the sword from the Knight to the Fairy/Maiden.

"Ha ha!" Thought I, "I will make a simple and subtle statement about the modern day theft of the traditional masculine phallus, igniting the much overlooked issue of modern feminism, what a clever little man i am."
After several hours of editting i read and realised too late that Keats' original poem was already based on the idea of the female stealing everything from the male and leaving him a blubbering mess, so all i was doing was reinforcing the the original meaning of the artwork. Zounds and blast it all! Back to the drawing board I metaphorically stomped, fearing the giant red X of shame, and more importantly pondering why a girlfriend of times past had sent the poem to me in the first place.

My second attempt came in the wee hours of the night where i finally went with one of my favourite paintings, Pierre-Auguste Cot's "Le Printemps". This time i decided to aim for a more subtle and small alteration. (On my first go however i was so subtle, no one i tested it on managed to notice, so i had to sleep on it and give it a second attempt)

For me, Le Printemps gives you the essence of one of the rare perfect moments you can share with a partner, perhaps a post-coital glowing union in a bath of sunlight, or a silent midnight hour watching them asleep, arms curled around you.. and Cot has managed to present it to the viewer in this beautiful scene.
Of course in my experience this moment is fleeting and the harder you try to hold onto it the more evasive it becomes, so in my jealousy of these two preraphaelite lovers of perfection i decided to give the viewer the satisfaction of seeing the oncoming inevitable ruining of the moment with the rope holding up their swing about to snap.

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Springtime/Le Printemps
Le Printemps Cassé
La Belle Dame Sans Merci
La belle dame avec épée

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posted by Raymond Luxury Yacht on September 24th, 2006 7:00 PM

Fine work, Mouse! Your retouching certainly appears to be have been done with great care.

Welcome back.

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posted by Ink Tea on September 24th, 2006 7:23 PM

Wow! I'd prefer to spend my votes on bigger tasks, but you did this with such skill and earnest thoughtfulness, that I'll toss aside my habits this time around.

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posted by Orion on September 24th, 2006 10:19 PM

A vote earned is a vote earned...small task or not. I think it says something about the power of the original "moment" when I can't help but see the lovers do anything but laugh when the rope breaks, even strengthening the moment more than breaking it. I must admit that I looked at the pictures for a solid two minutes before I gave up and read your description text for the change...I was never too good at those Highlights puzzles, if I recall.

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posted by Jackie H on September 25th, 2006 9:38 AM

Funny, I thought the knight in the second painting looked pretty impotent even with his sword. Oh well. The perilous swing idea is amazing.

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posted by Cameron on September 25th, 2006 10:11 AM

Outstanding...

That's some of the finest photoshopping I've seen in this task, and to the best effect. The mere transferance of the sword turns that painting upside down.

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posted by avidd opolis on September 25th, 2006 3:23 PM

May all your endeavors be so fruitful!

Gosh
posted by Møuse on September 27th, 2006 9:17 AM

I had been considering never actually posting this task because my completion of it lacked in real-life-ness, plus having to do something so subtle and small meant that when i was finished i was worried about the lack of evident work done on it, so im amazed and smiling from ear to ear that its got such a positive response, Merci, and apologies for the lack of tasks recently, getting back into the swing of things now!

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posted by Sparrows Fall on April 27th, 2008 7:07 AM

I am very glad you posted this - the changes are so subtle that they are hard, at first, to pick out, but once you notice them they change everything.

what a clever little man indeed!
posted by Minch on June 25th, 2008 10:14 AM