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Under The Spotlights by Voo
July 21st, 2008 1:55 PM
I humbly present for your approval: "Love Fades, But Ink Is Forever."
It's the very short story of two young lovers on a trip to Las Vegas and the situation they find themselves in after a few unlucky coin tosses. I hope you like it. And I hope I did okay with the voices, heh.
I recorded it on the SF0 number. It's like 5 minutes long, I think? I know the task recommends 10-15 but I wrote what I felt needed to be in there without any filler or padding. Comedy needs to be sharp and lean. Also, it ended up shorter than I thought it would be when I was writing it.
[[Voo]]
It's the very short story of two young lovers on a trip to Las Vegas and the situation they find themselves in after a few unlucky coin tosses. I hope you like it. And I hope I did okay with the voices, heh.
I recorded it on the SF0 number. It's like 5 minutes long, I think? I know the task recommends 10-15 but I wrote what I felt needed to be in there without any filler or padding. Comedy needs to be sharp and lean. Also, it ended up shorter than I thought it would be when I was writing it.
[[Voo]]
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posted by Darkaardvark on July 25th, 2008 9:13 PM
If you click play on the mp3, it says "Voicemail from (1)612-251-****
I'm not really sure how to edit it out, if you want to, because I've never used the sf0-phone uploader thing before.
posted by Lincøln on July 25th, 2008 9:23 PM
Yeah, I saw that too, and I just went back and noticed that the task I did with a phone call proof has my phone number on it too. So go find that phone number and give me a call. Call any time!
posted by Voo on July 25th, 2008 10:18 PM
Yeah, I trust SF0ers with my number. Let's pray I'm not proven naive. Heh.
I liked it!
Added bonus: Voo's phone number!