Thanks +1

i will do im not very good at the whole praxis thing i miss rather alot of points i could add? but we'll go check our plants and see where theyve gone? and what do you mean on payer introduction? please elaborate. cheers

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A bit of elaboration on what happened and highlighting of the main parts is all that's really necessary; the completion itself seems (from what I can tell here) to be pretty solid. For instance: the plants eventually ended up in two car parks and a carriageway, but this isn't immediately clear to the reader. The photos of leaving them at their destinations look, at first glance, to just be you holding the plants in those places, and the descriptions always talk of the person "display"ing the plant, rather than depositing or leaving it there. The neat rationale behind your own choice of drop point (the car sales lot, with its little cleanliness ironies) is similarly easy to lose in the shuffle.

Other than that, I was also a little curious about the two store-bought plants - where you got them, what kind of plant they are, etc. since we never really got to "meet" these two as we did the daffodil. It's just a little thing, but color me curious about it (and anyway, asking little questions like that when the writeup didn't mention them is part of the purpose of comments).

It's easy to be intimidated, but don't be! You are already doing very well - the story from when you captured your third potted plant from-the-wild is the kind of silly on-the-fly thinking that we thrive on around here. All that remains is to present it a little more clearly, and flesh out the barebones parts of your process a bit. :)