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Marshall Electric
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Object Annotation by Marshall Electric

October 15th, 2007 12:26 PM

INSTRUCTIONS: Pick a local public object that you enjoy and leave a note on it describing your feelings in great detail.

"archemedes and me,
both married in our own way
to old ideas in new clothes."
-j. cale


on an overpass above amsterdam avenue at 117th street in new york city there stands a statue that is shaped curiously like a tooth amidst a sea of strange and vaguely inappropriate-for-the-occasion sculptures outside of columbia's law school.

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this statue rotates if you get enough people together to push it, a simple machine to make archemedes proud. it's quite fun. over the years, however, it has worn itself down, and now requires a great effort to even move it a slight distance.

I composed an, uh, "elegiac poem" to said tooth-esque structure, entitled "O, Tooth!" and performed it at the scene. considering I am not a poet, it went as well as could be expected.

O, tooth!
A basalt gleam in paling light,
Marching with march hares
Your power all our own.

We are your force, tooth,
As agency embodied, torque and torsion,
You move and we move with you,
We walk past, you stand alone.

Should we come to sleepless night,
Deserted paths and fitful dreams,
I will press my shoulder to your side,
And drive us on till dawn.


performance and further photographs follow.

- smaller

"O, Tooth!" by Marshall Electric


a toothy matter

a toothy matter

looking north.


the note

the note

ah, poetry.


"O, tooth!"

"O, tooth!"

O, pioneers? O, calcutta? both?


and more

and more

note how the last line splits. that was totally intentional. totally.


from a bit further back

from a bit further back


object: annotated

object: annotated



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Fantastic.
posted by Spidere on October 15th, 2007 12:34 PM

Nicely done.

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posted by JTony Loves Brains on October 15th, 2007 1:08 PM

Really cool,
Though I wish a version of the annotation could have been made slightly more permanent. The poem's so great and those post-its are going to start flaking off in like, an hour.

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posted by Charlie Fish on October 15th, 2007 1:13 PM

Wow. Annotation and performance art. Good one.

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posted by carina on February 17th, 2008 10:09 AM

very nice poem.