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Information Insertion by Force TheOneAndOnly
July 18th, 2009 10:17 PM
Well I was looking at the "Kids don't Float" sign and noticed a significant lack of drowning information therein. So I researched and wrote down some statistics and prevention information on drowning and posted them Right below the sign nest to the life vests.
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posted by Anna Louise on July 27th, 2009 1:21 PM
I love the last lines the most! "I hope this was informative." That is so considerate. And "Happy swimming!" just to make sure your readers are not too affraid to ever touch the water again. I love it! Very helpful information.
posted by Force TheOneAndOnly on July 28th, 2009 2:12 AM
I thought that would be a good touch, after all, if I was reading it I know I'd need the incouragement. Thx! (:
Having worked a season in an upstate NY summer camp I gladly give my personal accreditation to this valuable information.
If inner city NY kids were expected to use this pool you should also add "Just becuase you've seen people swimming on TV it doen't mean that you know how to swim"
Kinda funny in retrospect, annoying and terrifying at the time seeing kids confidently dive into the deep end and then nearly drown.