15 + 25 points
Placepoem by The Time Traveler
November 29th, 2011 7:58 PM
my father's old apartment. he hasn't lived there in a long time, but it was easy enough to go back. traveling along one's own timeline is more difficult, but doable- and it was nice to see it again.
i timed my arrival with one of his business trips, and had the place to myself. i spent a few minutes in my memory before collecting words, but i'm easily distracted from missions, it's nothing new. ha.
I'll put my poem first:
Let’s stay young- you, me
_____The imaginary heroes- bulletproof Russians in love
I know your uncivil seasons (hope out of nowhere)
_____Overconfidence calling, too involved in survival
You’re doing too much (why limit first class?)
_____I never let small lonely boys off forever
I need cheap thrills (it’s the homicide season)
_____Careless kiss- don’t!
Fighting jade angels for hours (total: twelve)
_____You Romanized treachery for valor
Rhino down! You say ‘want to go?’
_____Why?
For tea from the duke on his world
_____Yes, Crusaders enjoy convenient culture
Any time of war crushed it
_____‘best’. ‘natural’. Collapsible!
Think, ‘worth it’?
_____No.
Ah,
_____A precursor for your voice
Following many a day, Return after traffic
_____First by riptide, then road-street!
Better now with little inches
_____By way this metal tube
Onward!
Three secrets in charity (saying ‘use the dark machine’)
_____Can uses of the seventh power air charity with faith?
Together, me and you welcome the blind moon
_____God’s archer with a raincoat
I am original in times of serpents
_____Classic old ways end at the Atlantic
With sayings read of red
_____Seen in the way
Don’t try these.
_____Or breathe the monkey’s coffee
Remember not to let us hope
_____Spirits cross the perfect man
Weeds don’t witness the return of light
_____The faraway man’s nightmare
Lower than is natural
_____Empty life soothes other bees
Circle the solo moon
_____Burst affairs in culture
Ask not- the Stonehenge day
_____A case of bone and pain
Art aware can triple delight
_____And release me of friend or foe
Help support your healing elements
_____And any gorilla of cream
Novel. Let’s double it.
With Gemini spice as weather
_____This street for gold sweeps magic away
With hollyhock leaf for day
_____And your best speech
Please both or more
_____ In this place…
__________Use.
here are my words:
in the bookcases:
the blind moon serpents times in god's and precursor the culture romanized with no in careless as on witness red dark path of a in the for of any for valor novel now then charity archer hope the culture saying sayings uses healing elements of road free raincoat natural don't you at i know the rhino down the firl war machine with inches the out of nowhere faith charity hope kiss ah treachery a case of spirits cross perfect the man end secrets speech the far away man air uncivil seasons nightmare street first by gold the gemini nightmare monkey's syndrome raincoat
other forms of literature:
voice three in onward
on mementos/misc.:
art fighting fighting or friend or foe welcome you for at circle triple hollyhock leaf was stonehenge remember not to overconfidence with calling aware can in too read involved are in day day day day ask not following many survival better you say youre doing why go want to no too much dont let us with place way first class magic coffee total seventh limit wall use power twelve seen way why say
in the music racks:
need with me riptide cheap thrills by as weather return after the moon me traffic the invention tea from the on a the of for off lonely boys solo the return to forever i am atlantic and in together let's stay young duke and his dont me of the best fast light of world gorilla this pocked crusaders yes classic old ways me never let small
audio-visual racks:
weeds jade imaginary bulletproof heroes love russians the homicide season
on clothing:
a little lower than the angles
on reality games:
burst your it's
on personal notes:
i think worth this enjoy affairs collapsible metal tube
on bags:
help you support your today your your your please both or more
In the bathroom:
convenient air with bees natural and delight cream natural is soothes of because cods like a breath sweeps any time it release away and and spice four hours pain bone
in the kitchen:
classic original double crushed empty life try these other great lets it
i timed my arrival with one of his business trips, and had the place to myself. i spent a few minutes in my memory before collecting words, but i'm easily distracted from missions, it's nothing new. ha.
I'll put my poem first:
Let’s stay young- you, me
_____The imaginary heroes- bulletproof Russians in love
I know your uncivil seasons (hope out of nowhere)
_____Overconfidence calling, too involved in survival
You’re doing too much (why limit first class?)
_____I never let small lonely boys off forever
I need cheap thrills (it’s the homicide season)
_____Careless kiss- don’t!
Fighting jade angels for hours (total: twelve)
_____You Romanized treachery for valor
Rhino down! You say ‘want to go?’
_____Why?
For tea from the duke on his world
_____Yes, Crusaders enjoy convenient culture
Any time of war crushed it
_____‘best’. ‘natural’. Collapsible!
Think, ‘worth it’?
_____No.
Ah,
_____A precursor for your voice
Following many a day, Return after traffic
_____First by riptide, then road-street!
Better now with little inches
_____By way this metal tube
Onward!
Three secrets in charity (saying ‘use the dark machine’)
_____Can uses of the seventh power air charity with faith?
Together, me and you welcome the blind moon
_____God’s archer with a raincoat
I am original in times of serpents
_____Classic old ways end at the Atlantic
With sayings read of red
_____Seen in the way
Don’t try these.
_____Or breathe the monkey’s coffee
Remember not to let us hope
_____Spirits cross the perfect man
Weeds don’t witness the return of light
_____The faraway man’s nightmare
Lower than is natural
_____Empty life soothes other bees
Circle the solo moon
_____Burst affairs in culture
Ask not- the Stonehenge day
_____A case of bone and pain
Art aware can triple delight
_____And release me of friend or foe
Help support your healing elements
_____And any gorilla of cream
Novel. Let’s double it.
With Gemini spice as weather
_____This street for gold sweeps magic away
With hollyhock leaf for day
_____And your best speech
Please both or more
_____ In this place…
__________Use.
here are my words:
in the bookcases:
the blind moon serpents times in god's and precursor the culture romanized with no in careless as on witness red dark path of a in the for of any for valor novel now then charity archer hope the culture saying sayings uses healing elements of road free raincoat natural don't you at i know the rhino down the firl war machine with inches the out of nowhere faith charity hope kiss ah treachery a case of spirits cross perfect the man end secrets speech the far away man air uncivil seasons nightmare street first by gold the gemini nightmare monkey's syndrome raincoat
other forms of literature:
voice three in onward
on mementos/misc.:
art fighting fighting or friend or foe welcome you for at circle triple hollyhock leaf was stonehenge remember not to overconfidence with calling aware can in too read involved are in day day day day ask not following many survival better you say youre doing why go want to no too much dont let us with place way first class magic coffee total seventh limit wall use power twelve seen way why say
in the music racks:
need with me riptide cheap thrills by as weather return after the moon me traffic the invention tea from the on a the of for off lonely boys solo the return to forever i am atlantic and in together let's stay young duke and his dont me of the best fast light of world gorilla this pocked crusaders yes classic old ways me never let small
audio-visual racks:
weeds jade imaginary bulletproof heroes love russians the homicide season
on clothing:
a little lower than the angles
on reality games:
burst your it's
on personal notes:
i think worth this enjoy affairs collapsible metal tube
on bags:
help you support your today your your your please both or more
In the bathroom:
convenient air with bees natural and delight cream natural is soothes of because cods like a breath sweeps any time it release away and and spice four hours pain bone
in the kitchen:
classic original double crushed empty life try these other great lets it
i like the structure of this poem. why are there bees and cod in your father's bathroom? I knew people were taking on all kinds of new roomates, the economy being what it is, but bees?