

25 + 15 points
d a d a 1 by Darkaardvark
January 21st, 2007 9:03 PM
(I'm new to Dadaism- if adding the line-breaks is a big no-no (inserting my own bias into the poem?) I can take them out)
If this Iraq escalating was risk
states a be States fact about effort be Vietnam
as in, the found nothing
not all pulled Asia in if installed Southeast
the ours same of the thorn
quickly on and struggle continues
their the Iraq and claimed out ensue U.S. way
will fell misguided
this rather will United hands again
sort Lyndon a power of at and will
that new leaves most the be sectarian
dead be once blood in a Johnson
with happened decisions is heal violence regime
mid-1960s war
the once would United will even itself
the to if in president his Vietnam
manage the of true
the will
wrong
If this Iraq escalating was risk
states a be States fact about effort be Vietnam
as in, the found nothing
not all pulled Asia in if installed Southeast
the ours same of the thorn
quickly on and struggle continues
their the Iraq and claimed out ensue U.S. way
will fell misguided
this rather will United hands again
sort Lyndon a power of at and will
that new leaves most the be sectarian
dead be once blood in a Johnson
with happened decisions is heal violence regime
mid-1960s war
the once would United will even itself
the to if in president his Vietnam
manage the of true
the will
wrong
My favorite line: "the once would United will even itself". It speaks to a certain flattening of the physical and political landscape that comes with American peace keeping forces.