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Once Upon a Time... by Stu

November 15th, 2007 2:04 AM

INSTRUCTIONS: Tell or read a story to an animal. Document the animal's reaction to your storytelling skills.

I have been wanting to do this task since I first saw it. The idea that popped into my head was reading Eric Carle's The Very Hungry Caterpillar while modifying it to fit the animal, so I could feed the animal as I read. Lots of animals very small attention spans for human interaction, and food always seems to help that.

I have a dwarf hamster named Winnie. I've owned her for a little more than a week. She's still a baby, though she's growing pretty quickly. I thought she might like some storytime. With food! (As a note: I took a couple pictures of the book. I'm not trying to redistribute it illegally. I'm pretty sure fair use will let me show its cover and a page inside it, but if it doesn't, I'll happily take it down.)

First, I prepared the food. I'll list it when I get to that part in the book:

The food!

Then I grabbed some food for me. I'm a very hungry person! (It's olive oil with basil, black pepper, and garlic in it, with bread to dip in it.)

A snack for me.

I went over to her habitat (which I can't wait to expand):

The

I let her crawl onto my hand. She's very people-friendly, I think because I got her so young (before she was able to develop a fear of people). I took her to her Shoebox of Storytime, and I put her hamster potty in it in case she needed to use the facilities. Winnie is mostly potty trained. It's pretty awesome.

Winnie climbing into her potty.

I let her get comfortable in the Shoebox of Storytime, then I began to read:

The Book

When I got to the page describing the foods the caterpillar ate,

The awesome page with the holes in it.

I fed Winnie a piece of grape tomato for Monday:

Piece of grape tomato

Two pieces of baby corn for Tuesday:

Two pieces of corn for Tuesday

Three pieces of bamboo shoot for Wednesday, four pieces of tofu for Thursday, and five pieces of water chestnut for Friday. (Interruption of story: I didn't let her eat all of this, as it probably would have made her sick (just like the VHCaterpillar!), but I let her take nibbles of everything. She was very attentive, and she seemed to get more and more excited as time went on.)

And on SATURDAY, she had:

Saturday had lots of food!

A corn kernel, a pumpkin seed, some green pepper, an unidentifiable seed, a food pellet, a food patty, a carrot treat, a dried piece of banana, some cheddar cheese, a green pea, and a piece of toast. By the end, she would have had a bellyache (were it not for my finishing the story before she could actually eat everything). She ate some pea pod to help soothe that non-existent bellyache, and she found herself a cocoon of a toilet paper roll:

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A few moments later, she emerged from her cocoon:

Emerging from the toilet paper roll cocoon.

And she was a beautiful hamsterfly!

Hamsterfly

Analysis

Winnie seemed to enjoy the food. She responds well to my voice, so I'm guessing this helped build trust. Afterwards, we spent a bit more quality time together. Storytime was a success, so I'm saving the Shoebox of Storytime, and I'm thinking my next book may be something along the lines of Goodnight, Moon with interaction as stuff is being good-nighted. Or maybe I'll re-read this and see if she learns that it means food, sort of like kids come to expect certain words even when they don't know how to read. "Those sounds plus this box means food! Yay!" would be a neat end-result.

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The food!
A snack for me.
The "habitat."
Winnie climbing into her potty.
The Book
The awesome page with the holes in it.
Piece of grape tomato
Two pieces of corn for Tuesday
Saturday had lots of food!
P1010382.JPG
Emerging from the toilet paper roll cocoon.
Hamsterfly

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posted by Meta tron on November 15th, 2007 2:44 AM

This is lovely! so so very lovely!

*votes*

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posted by Charlie Fish on November 15th, 2007 3:17 AM

A true Biome player. Actually manages to make reading to an animal interesting.

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posted by Stu on November 15th, 2007 6:26 AM

Meta: Thank you! I think Winnie agrees, and that's the most fun part of all.

Fish: Thank you. I was worried it'd fail completely--that Winnie would hide or think the food was all gross. In fact, at first, she was a bit hesitant about her new environment (the Shoebox of Storytime), but it seemed to work itself out, and she got into the groove of things.

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posted by Flitworth on November 15th, 2007 7:05 AM

I've seen a horsefly. I've seen a housefly. I've even seen a dragonfly, but I ain't never seen no hampsterfly!

*grin*

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posted by Stu on November 15th, 2007 7:12 AM

Oh man! Now you're making me think of Dumbo. "I've seen a peanut stand, I've seen a rubber band. I've seen a needle that winked it's eye."

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posted by Jellybean of Thark on November 15th, 2007 7:52 AM

Aw, crap! Now you've got "Baby Mine" stuck in my head. I'm gonna be weepy all day at work now.

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posted by Stu on November 15th, 2007 8:04 AM

El Capitan: Oh man! Such a good song. And if you've got to be weepy, "Baby Mine" isn't a bad reason.

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posted by The Vixen on November 15th, 2007 9:33 AM

I laughed really loud when I read "And she was a beautiful hamsterfly!"
It echoed throughout my house and no one heard it but me. I'm guessing that's a good thing...

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posted by Stu on November 15th, 2007 9:56 AM

Vixen: Yay! Big laughs can feel so good.

El Capitan again: I had to drop Winnie off at a friend's house while I go away for Thanksgiving, and on the way there, I sang her some of "Baby Mine." Weepy I was.

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posted by Jellybean of Thark on November 15th, 2007 10:31 AM

I have to go lie down now...

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posted by Stu on November 15th, 2007 10:56 AM

El Capitan: Awww. Think about "Pink Elephants on Parade." Here they come, hippity-hoppity! They're here, they're here.

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posted by Jellybean of Thark on November 15th, 2007 3:14 PM

As performed by Sun Ra and his Arkestra!

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posted by Alana Abbott on November 15th, 2007 8:12 PM

So cute! I'm super glad the SF0 mailer linked to this task.

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posted by Lank on November 15th, 2007 9:09 PM

Awesome. For a future storytime, I recommend "I Wish I Were a Butterfly" by James Howe. I used to love reading that to kids. A hamsterfly might enjoy it too.

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posted by Ben Yamiin on November 16th, 2007 8:25 AM

K. Everybody one...two...three...awwwwwww.

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posted by Stu on November 19th, 2007 7:54 PM

El Capitan: I see your Sun Ra and raise you a Bette Midler

Alana: What is this SF0 mailer? That makes me happy. I'm glad you're super glad.

Lanki: Neato! I will look into it. There are a few good children's bookstores around where I live. I like to give good children's books as gifts--a recent favorite is Don't Let the Pigeon Stay Up Late.

B.MHANCM: I know. It's almost sickening. But I love my hamster.

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posted by miss understanding on November 20th, 2007 12:48 PM

I love the "shoebox of storytime" and now I've got Dumbo songs stuck in my head as well.

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posted by Stu on November 20th, 2007 4:28 PM

Miss: The SoS is a new favorite of mine, too. I just watched Pink Elephants On Parade on youtube. I heart the youtube.