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Take Apart Art by YellowBear

July 23rd, 2007 5:18 PM

INSTRUCTIONS: Take apart a piece of artwork and reassemble it as you see fit.

To complete this fine task I have decided that I should dismantle and rearrange one of my (J.S. Bach) finest fugues! I decided to start with Fugue No. 12 in F Minor, from The Well-Tempered Clavier Book II.

The Fugue is a particularly difficult but beautiful form of contapuntal composition. A fugue is sort of like a round or a cannon, but with a lot more restrictions. One voice starts the piece and then other voices enter one after another. The difference is that the voices in fugues enter on higher and lower pitches. All fugues are built upon a small musical section called the Subject.

The subject for Fugue No. 12 (WTC II) looks like this
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Fugues start with what is called the Exposition. In the exposition the subject being played in a single voice in the tonic key (F Minor For Us). After the statement of the subject, a second voice enters with the subject transposed to the key of the dominant. When the subject is re-introduced in a different key than it was originally written, it is called the Answer. While the Answer is playing, the voice that had played the Subject goes on to develop other melodic material.

Some fugues have a Counter Subject that plays along with the answer, this is like another small musical idea that is repeated throughout the piece. The fugue I chose doesn't use a counter subject, so don't worry about that.

I know it sounds very confusing, but it really isnt that bad. Take a look at the structure of this fugue. You can see from the picture that this Fugue is written for 3 voices (three notes on a keyboard, not actual voices) and the Subject is introduced a total of 9 times (The Pink Boxes).
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Lets look at that first section on the actual score
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(*Oops there is a typo, the Answer is down a 4th from the original, not a 5th)

The sections circled in green are the subject. Originally played starting on C in the upper voice, then introduced on F in the middle voice, and then finally C again in the lower voice. I decided to color code each voice (1 = Blue, 2 = Red, 3 = Orange). This will help clarify exactly what is going on as I rearrange/swap voices.

Also, each place the subject enters in the score I have placed a rehersal mark (The big A,B,C,D... lettters in the score) to make it easier to see what is going on.
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The overall goal of a Fugue is to give a thorough exposition of the melodic possibilities of the subject. I find fugues especially fascinating because of the difficulty that is inherent in writing one musical idea to be used in all the voices. It needs to be both melodically engaging and harmonically well defined. It needs to be used at the tonic and at the dominant so there are strict rules on the types of interval leaps that can be employed. Its rhythm needs to start out simple enough to be embelished in an interesting way during the other parts of the fuge. WHAT A HASSLE! Bach is the master.

After the theme has been introduced in each voice the next section of the Fugue begins, the first Episode. This is where the material is developed and jostled around in fun ways. After that comes the Middle Entries (When the subject comes back in the middle), then followed by more episodes. This cycle of entries and episodes continues until the composer gets tired of pulling out his hair trying to make it work. It is like the most frustrating logic/jugsaw puzzle you have ever seen putting a fugue together. Since the lines chase each other around across all the voices its like a pair of handcuffs on what you can and can't do. And all the pieces need to be written so that they can be inverted and still sound good.

I wanted to try to share my appreciation for Bach's talent by ripping this piece apart and rearranging it in different ways. Because surprisingly, as impossible as it may sound, you can jumble up all the parts and it still sounds good. Its hard enough to write good music, but good music that can be played upsidown or inside out? No Way. For Bach only. (TANGENT!: In fact Bach's compositional precision and consistency is so impressive that you can actually use Calculus to create integrals of the lines and harmonic movement of many of his pieces)

Now might be a good time to give it a listen. Lets check out Listening Example #1 (For those interested, the scores for all examples are available in the image section at the end)

Example #1
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Sounds Pretty Good Huh? Well, maby you don't think so, ...But I like it!

Once I got this bad boy into my computer I decided that I would slowly start rearranging it til we ended up with something totally different.

The first thing that I thought I would do is to flip voices one and three (Blue/Orange). This reverses the order of entry for the voices in the exposition and essentially turns the melody line into the bass line, and vice versa. The inner voice remains unchanged. The results are in Listening Example #2. Isn't it amazing that it all works so well when you change what is on top and what is on bottom?!? The subject now initially enters in the lower voice.

Example #2
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Still sounds good!
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For the next level of take apart I decided to divide the piece into sections based on the subject entries. Then I utilized chance operations (Thanks John Cage!) to randomly determine the ordering of the voices through each section.
I took out three playing cards and chose them at random for each section.
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The results I got on my chance operations were as follows:
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This is where the whole exercise got a bit more artistic. Using the random ordering I went in and started moving around the voices. I used my own discretion about which octave to place the parts in and on which beat to exchange the voices to preserve the subject entry and clearly as possible. I tried to remain as close as seemed reasonable to the total range of the original piece and the spacing between the original voice positions. It worked out very fluidly, as can be expected, since i retained the integrity of the original section lengths.
Check it out in Listening Example #3.

Example #3
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Fun Fun Fun! "It's can't be that hard to write music that you can play in any voice?!?" Um....Sure.
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I was very pleased with the results from my chance operations so I decided to extend the technique further. For the next layer of deconstruction I decided to use the same methods, but I employed randomization to each individual meassure.
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Piecing the meassures together got a little bit harder. There was lots of harmonic stagnation that resulted. I used my own judgement as to whether or not the voices should be mostly ascending or descending, I tried to avoid consective large leaps in the same direction and voice crossing to remain idiomatically consistent with the original.

This resulted in Listening Example #4. Certainly it continues to get more distant from the harmonies of the original, but it maintains its integrity well under the circumstances.

Example #4
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I thought I wanted to do one more after this, I was dabbling with the idea of a remix by adding some sampled beats, or cutting up all of the meassures and placing them completely at random. But honestly I shyed away from these ideas because I estimated they would take way too long. Instead I thought that one more chance operation could thoroughly break this piece into unrecognizable parts. Starting with the score for Example #4 I decided to flip a coin for each meassure in each voice. If it came up heads I left it alone, if it came up tails I reversed the order of all the notes in the meassure (this is called Retrograde).

In order to show the meassures that underwent a retrograde transformation I used similar colors. Blue -> Green, Red -> Pink, Orange -> Yellow

After a couple hundred coin flips I ended up with Listening Example #5. Finally the original subject is nearly unrecognizable, this sounds almost like a totally new piece. The random switching introduces a couple new rhythms into the piece that give it a very different feeling. Especially the switching of phrases consisting of one eighth followed by two sixteenths. This rhythm feels much more rushed and unsettling. It changes the character greatly. This still has obvious stylistic nods to music of Bach's time, but this clearly would/could not have been written in that time. (Only Satan would make you write music like this in the late 17th century, and that could be dangerous buisness!!)

Example #5
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I had a blast doing this! I hope you have enjoyed. I think there will be more Classical music Frankenstein-ery in my future, just for fun.

Besides when else am I gonna use my powdered wig?

"I Got Duckets In The Bank, Whatchu Think About That!?" - Bach

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This Is How I Was Originally Going To Complete This Task...
The Subject
Fugue Structure
The Exposition
Fugue #12 F Minor Listening Example #1
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Voices 1 & 3 Swapped Listening Example #2
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Chance Operations Varied By Section Listening Example #3
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Chance Operations By Meassure, Listening Example #4
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Chance Operations & Random Retrogrades, Listening Example #5 (1/5)
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Playin' Cards
Random Results For Variation At Theme Entrances
Randomized By Meassure
That's Me J.S. YellowBach

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29 comment(s)

Phew!
posted by Lank on July 19th, 2007 7:36 PM

Thanks, Bach! It's about time somebody put a kick-ass completion on this stagnant Praxis!

I'm interested to see what happens if you continue your experiments and go further...

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posted by travelbug on July 19th, 2007 7:42 PM

dude. i think this is effen brilliant!!! you have to do the re-mix. you have to!!! I think this proof should win an sf0 award of somekind. send me your address and i might mail you something amazing.

hmmm
posted by Cthulhu Kitty on July 19th, 2007 7:58 PM

pushing this task to the limit?

This completion is music to my ears…
posted by Blue on July 19th, 2007 8:35 PM

This task completion is music to my ears…
The ideas are all very foreign to me and it is one of the few tasks with a lot of text that I have read through and not just skipped to the pictures.

However, I would like to take this time to disagree with Lank(Able Inkin')…
I do not think there is the Epicness that there was for a stretch(starting half way down the page)

But it is defensibly not stagnant, it is simply filled with growth of level one players instead of level five players. I feel it is acceptable to do a few for point completions to get a point base to get a feel for SFØ and open up the tasks that are available. During the last week there has been amazing growth in the number of players who do more then create a pictureless profile. The most I have seen in the Glasnost Era. These players are giving there first stabs at completions. These players bravely subject themselves to the criticism of senior players; both constructive and destructive.

These feuds are simply a sign of the democratic nature of SFØ, merely the result of a refusal for strict rules to be drawn out; and I think it is beautiful. There is no wrong way to play SFØ. The only guidelines are imaginary point based system and the acclaim or critic of your peers.

Yes peoples internet addictions can seem like a blemish on the Praxis page. But I see it as a luir to draw these players out into realspa©e the result being that everyone grows a little. I think we should usher them into SFØ and make our epic madness contagious.

Yellowbear(Bach) I must apologize for using this beautiful completion as a soapbox for my own views(I am practically bloggin here) But SFØ still condones freedom of speech even if the American Government does not.

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posted by Ziggy C. on July 19th, 2007 9:05 PM

Rock.

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posted by The Vixen on July 19th, 2007 9:16 PM

Holy snap... you kick ass.

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posted by Ink Tea on July 19th, 2007 9:36 PM

NERD! You get my vote. Two if I could vote twice.

Sorry CyberKitty...
posted by YellowBear on July 19th, 2007 10:47 PM

No epicness intended, just your run of the mill YellowBear task completion today. But you should see the epic completions I got in the works...

**To Shalacho, no need to feel bad about soapbox behavior. Since there is no wrong way to play, I can't rightly get upset. I completely support the fostering of discussion around here in all forms. I certainly remember the onset of SF0 hysteria, submitting two or three tasks a day in the beginning, some of questionable quality, one retroactive completion for which I was promptly educated. Since we have been lucky enough to get so many new faces recently it is bound to happen that many of the less exciting completions show up, or completions that are rushed out of excitement induced by the rush of level gaining. No doubt that as these players advance in the game and take some time to appreciate the examples laid down by those ahead of them, they will be inspired to do awesome things.

When I joined I was certainly spurred on by seeing the crazy things that You (whatever your name is today), Lowteck, p00n, Ziggy, Burn, Inky, Lank, CyberKitty, El Bigote, Burn Unit, Anna, Eddy & Soooo many other people had done (I could list lots more names & link individual tasks, but that is beside the point.) Including some great players who did not return into the Glastnost era, and I only know about from scouering old completions.

If you are new or sort of new, do yourself a favor and look back, way back at the things that have been long since forgotten some of them are amazing. Everyone loves getting a vote on a task they completed 6 months ago. Seeing all the crazy things that had been done made me burn to complete my own completions better or more fully realized. It made the frequency of my submissions decline, but the quality went way up. I learned that for me the right way to play this game is to do a 15 or 25 point task and earn myself tons of votes, treat every task as an epic completion. I am not advocating that everyone play this way, its just what works for me. I like seeing votes so much more than points, and thinking that every time I try to do a task I am trying to get the fleur next to my name. Hopefully making some of you smile, or learn something new. I feel like Sf0 makes me smile all the time and look at our world in a slightly different way. I'm sure some of you can relate to thinking of a a bunch of tasks rush into your head if you see a funny sign, or get lost or anything. Since we all get to decide the type of sf0 we want to help create, I try to play in a way that will make other people push themselves farther. Like I feel I was pushed by those that showed me the way.

I dont want the most points
I want you to not soon forget the name YellowBear.

Sorry for talking so much.

Oh, I should also mention... +1
posted by Ziggy C. on July 19th, 2007 11:07 PM

I'm interested to hear your opinion on the works of Mr. Cage and contemporary compositions in general.

Also, for lawls: http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/John_Cage
http://uncyclopedia.org/wiki/Philip_Glass

EDIT NOTE: They're parody wikis, in case you just overlooked them based on a glance at the URL. Very funny stuff, especially the self-referencing Glass article.

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posted by Ink Tea on November 6th, 2008 10:41 AM

I still love that Glass article. I look up this web page every time I think of him.

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posted by Ink Tea on July 20th, 2007 7:55 AM

OH Ziggy, you just made me SO HAPPY. I loooooourve Philip Glass.

Super Props...
posted by Blue on July 20th, 2007 8:40 AM

Super props for changing your profile picture to round out your task completion!!!

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posted by YellowBear on July 20th, 2007 10:30 AM

Ziggy - That is funny! I hadn't seen that page before, the Phillip Glass is hilarious. As for modern composition I have many thoughts. This may not be the best venue to express all of them. But suffice to say in summary I think the investigation of what is music/what is sound is intellectually important, but makes for some music that isnt fun to listen too. As for Serialism, its another one that is fun to play with on paper or in music theory class, but mostly ends in music that is abrasive, difficult and unpleasant.

Ink - You have confused me, you say you wish to give out two votes, but you havn't given out one yet, surely just an oversight, but dont leave me hangin... = )

Whew!
posted by Lank on July 20th, 2007 3:29 PM

Wow - I guess I sparked some conversation! Good!

I sincerely hope that no one takes offence to my use of the phrase "stagnant praxis page". It was certainly not intended as an insult. But if you do take offense, great! Let that ire stoke a fire under your ass to do something like the above!

I love new players! I remember (hell, it wasn't long ago) being brand-new to the game and doing the best I knew how to complete the simple tasks available to me. We all learn as we go.

I was just saying that it had been a while since I had seen anything as intelligent, comprehensive, and just plain awesome as this completion.

Hell yeah...
posted by Blue on July 20th, 2007 3:46 PM

Here's to epicness... I have a plan by I am thinking better of writing it here...

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posted by Ink Tea on August 1st, 2007 12:34 AM

I swear I voted for this... apologies!

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posted by Ink Tea on August 20th, 2007 2:28 PM

Philip glass, fill up glass, Fill phil, Glass class. PhilUP...

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posted by Ben Yamiin on October 8th, 2007 10:25 PM

Why the fuck didn't I vote for this before?

Vote!

entirely magical
posted by lara black on October 14th, 2007 5:03 PM

this may well be my favorite praxis so far! i would give you multiple votes if i could for combining three of my favorite things: process, randomness, and the counterpoint of j.s. bach. holy god.

OK, fine.
posted by Lincøln on October 22nd, 2007 10:06 AM

I have tried to read this and understand it, but I know nothing of music or how it works and my brain begins to hurt. I couldn't get through the first 50 pages of Cryptonomicon when they start talking about math and tones and the church pipes. I want to really dig this task and read it and say "right on man!" but I'm afraid I will bleed out of my ears if I really try to understand it.

But really smart people I respect (like Lank and Bex and Anna One) say it's awesome and I've listened to all of the music, and I can't tell what's going on, but it doesn't sound like poop, so you get a vote even though I have no idea what you have done here. The cigar box guitar I get. This, not so much.

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posted by Blue on November 2nd, 2007 1:17 PM

YB… I am surprised at you.

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posted by The Vixen on November 2nd, 2007 1:20 PM

Look who's part of S.N.I.D.E.

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posted by Bex. on November 2nd, 2007 1:37 PM

If a bear is a part of it, it can't be all nihlism all the time, right? Unless we have another EvilBear on our hands! or a mole!

**edit: how did I miss this completion before?
posted by Burn Unit on November 2nd, 2007 1:42 PM

Yellowbear, about this completion (on its own, not about the other editorializing).
What's the word I was looking for?

Oh yeah win.

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posted by The Vixen on November 2nd, 2007 1:45 PM

Win what? Why does it have to be about winning all the time?

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posted by Burn Unit on November 2nd, 2007 2:14 PM

I've revised my comment. Does that answer your question, Vixen?

I hate nihilism.
posted by YellowBear on November 2nd, 2007 10:09 PM

"We play for no other reason than to play, and we love the game."

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posted by Hey-Look-It's Caleb! on November 5th, 2007 5:24 AM

My goodness, it's impressive that it still works!

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posted by Stu on November 30th, 2007 8:28 AM

I want to do this with people singing. This is fantastic, dude. I remember learning my first fugue, and I remember the first time I decided to play it cross-hands to screw with the voicing (I used to do things like that to mess with my mom), and this brings all that back.

A beautiful job.