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Crazy Child
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Poetic Imagery by Crazy Child, Rather Dashing

July 22nd, 2009 11:21 PM / Location: 47.528590,7.5926256

INSTRUCTIONS: Choose a favorite poem. Now go out and take a photo to accompany every line. All the photos must be original, and they must not have been taken before reading this task description.

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Our most recent task was a quite personal one, as we were just recently able to go back and visit the neighbourhood in which we met all those years ago in Switzerland. This poem is our adventures therein. Much like our completion of Audio Scattering, it contains bittersweet tones of the role of time in relationships, and a remembrance of the past. The poem is "Absence", by Elizabeth Jennings.


I visited the place where we last met.

I visited the place where we last met.


Nothing was changed, the gardens were well tended,

Nothing was changed, the gardens were well tended,


the fountains sprayed their usual steady jet;

the fountains sprayed their usual steady jet;


There was no sign that anything had ended

There was no sign that anything had ended


and nothing to instruct me to forget.

and nothing to instruct me to forget.


The thoughtless birds that shook out of the trees,

The thoughtless birds that shook out of the trees,


singing an ecstasy I could not share,

singing an ecstasy I could not share,


played cunning in my thoughts. Surely in these

played cunning in my thoughts. Surely in these


pleasures there could not be a pain to bear

pleasures there could not be a pain to bear


or any discord shake the level breeze.

or any discord shake the level breeze.


It was because the place was just the same

It was because the place was just the same


that made your absence seem a savage force,

that made your absence seem a savage force,


for under all the gentleness there came

for under all the gentleness there came


an earthquake tremor: Fountain, birds and grass

an earthquake tremor: Fountain, birds and grass


were shaken by my thinking of your name.

were shaken by my thinking of your name.



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posted by Rin Brooker on July 23rd, 2009 1:45 AM

This is really beautiful! I love the poem and your pictures so much! I'm really inspired.

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posted by Not Here No More on July 23rd, 2009 1:48 AM

I have one point left, so I give it to you.

It's worth five. I'll come back later and give you the other four.

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posted by rongo rongo on July 29th, 2009 7:46 AM

This is pretty, but maybe it is also ironic to be doing a poem about absence during a sort of reunion/revisit.