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This story not only has words (though few) you didn't create the pictures yourself. And the story isn't very interesting.

I'm not going to flag this because you haven't done anything particurlay wrong here as I see it, but you sure as hell ain't done nothing right kiddo.

If you could re-submit this task with pictures you have created yourself I would consider overlooking the lame stoy to give you my vote. Getting votes from fellow players not only increases your score dramatically, but it helps you build friendships and involves you in a community beyond the people you already know.

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I just want to point out that Lank did a great completion on this task without taking the pictures himself. I don't think taking images of the next necessarily weakens a completion. But if you do take them off the net, they should rock. (This is partially a pre-defense for when I submit this task using images that I didn't create myself)

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ok so there's precident for a getty trawl, but I'm still not impressed (although the Paris Hilton joke at the end made me laugh). Lank had put a bit more effort into the story, so that can excuse (in my eyes) a lack of creative input image-wise. I look forward to seeing your story YellowBear.

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Abhorrent. Tasteless. Repugnant.


Yet expertly detourned.



As tasks are tourned and tired out
They often fare as flies;
Our populace can writhe and shout
Mais morts, sont agonies.

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*frowns at Burn Unit somewhat confusedly, looks down at the desk, and removes thesaurus from clutches*