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Player Photograph by Balaustine Envoy
September 21st, 2008 12:00 AM
Small ruby-red seeds
Do they taste sweet or sour?
Eat them one by one.
Do they taste sweet or sour?
Eat them one by one.
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posted by Absurdum on September 12th, 2008 7:48 PM
Or Japan ;-> Ha-i-ku. But then pedants should be shot, and it was a fine haiku. And of course the usual reaction at this point is to point out that non-standard haiku are actually pretty standard...
You're right though, New Zealand pronunciation screws up syllable count - just ask the Japanese students I had to teach english haiku to ;->
posted by Absurdum on September 12th, 2008 7:14 PM
That's a great picture. At thumbnail size I thought it was the writhing tentacle of a creature of which man was not supposed to know. In Macro it's a very nice shot of a pomegranate. Both good.
The haiku was nice too.
posted by Balaustine Envoy on September 12th, 2008 8:11 PM
Beautifully red
Yummy pomegranate dreams
Delicious haiku