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The Graphic Sonnet (Sonet Desinée) by Ink Tea

June 28th, 2006 7:48 PM

INSTRUCTIONS: Perhaps other assignments will involve the squirmy (sub?)genre of the graphic novel, but here you're asked to aid the birth of a new one: the Graphic Sonnet (or Sonet Dessinée). The goal of the graphic sonneteer is to take the form of the sonnet, which has become an embarrassment, and raise it to a more ambitious and meaningful level. In doing this, you will have to consider which characteristics of the sonnet can be incorporated into graphics; for example, some formic suggestion of the number 14 seems like a very reasonable requirement. How and whether you choose to represent a rhyme scheme, or the volta, or English-vs-Italian form, etc is up to you.

We will ask you, however, to prove that you have submitted your work to a literary journal, 'zine, magazine, website, or book series (et. al) that publishes sonnets.

I was really excited about this task, and recently decided to tackle it in a manner entirely sans words. This is kind of scary for me, because I love words and in writing I often hide behind metaphor and imagery. Visual art strikes me as much more raw and revealing, a different kind of exciting, a different kind of beauty.

I decided one afternoon to paint myself and being relatively pleased with the results, decided I would make myself the subject of my graphic sonnet. Fourteen photos, one for each line, and rhyme expressed through slight variations in very similar images. Each line had to stand on its own, but each verse had to be more than the sum of its parts- a narrative needed to form, some sort of relation or reaction between images. The last verse is the two line verse, and is often kind of a shocker, something that changes the entire tone of the poem. Easy, right? I just take a bunch of photographs of myself- in pairs to ensure the rhymes, and put them together in a way that makes sense.

Well, I quickly discovered that 14 images of oneself are too many. They made me feel like I must be vain or self-centered, like some sort of an attention whore or something, so I almost abandoned the effort. But a few friends assured me that I wasn't being some kind of a myspace camwhore. If it comes across that way, I apologize a lot. I still don't really feel like staring at it or anything, and I won't be hurt if you don't either. I apologize- it's a huge image.



I submitted this to Speakeasy magazine- a lit mag run by the Loft Literary Center in Minneapolis. I kind of doubt they'll give it a second glance, as it's an image and not actually words, but I included an explanation of what the attempt was supposed to achieve.

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A line from the sonnet

A line from the sonnet



Graphic Sonnet

Graphic Sonnet



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posted by Sean Mahan on June 28th, 2006 9:57 PM

This is fantastic! And, dare I ask - black and white clothes and paint since you're the text? Here's hoping Speakeasy does give it a second look.

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posted by Ink Tea on June 28th, 2006 10:30 PM

I honestly hadn't thought about the black and white clothes. I thought about the "lines".

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posted by star5 on June 28th, 2006 10:48 PM

i love this.

i love that it's got no words, but you can still sense a narrative.

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posted by Darkaardvark on March 3rd, 2007 11:37 AM

This does a really nice job of bridging the gap between art and poetry.

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posted by Lank on October 11th, 2007 8:00 PM

Have I mentioned how awesome this is?

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posted by JTony Loves Brains on January 3rd, 2008 11:26 PM

I also think it is great. It even iambs and trochees visually. Did the mag ever respond?

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posted by anna one on January 3rd, 2008 11:31 PM

This is yet another example of how I never kept a list of the fantastic tasks that I wanted to vote for during IE, but ran out of votes.

It's also an example of how some tasks have been done so well that it's almost impossible to attempt to create something new using the same parameters.

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posted by JTony Loves Brains on January 5th, 2008 10:17 AM

Oh, I don't know about that, Anna One. Although certain completions really do set a standard, I think that there's always room to pump new plasma into even the most popularly completed tasks. Look at Player Photograph, for example. I'm constantly amazed.