


The Graphic Sonnet (Sonet Desinée) by Ink Tea
June 28th, 2006 7:48 PMI decided one afternoon to paint myself and being relatively pleased with the results, decided I would make myself the subject of my graphic sonnet. Fourteen photos, one for each line, and rhyme expressed through slight variations in very similar images. Each line had to stand on its own, but each verse had to be more than the sum of its parts- a narrative needed to form, some sort of relation or reaction between images. The last verse is the two line verse, and is often kind of a shocker, something that changes the entire tone of the poem. Easy, right? I just take a bunch of photographs of myself- in pairs to ensure the rhymes, and put them together in a way that makes sense.
Well, I quickly discovered that 14 images of oneself are too many. They made me feel like I must be vain or self-centered, like some sort of an attention whore or something, so I almost abandoned the effort. But a few friends assured me that I wasn't being some kind of a myspace camwhore. If it comes across that way, I apologize a lot. I still don't really feel like staring at it or anything, and I won't be hurt if you don't either. I apologize- it's a huge image.

I submitted this to Speakeasy magazine- a lit mag run by the Loft Literary Center in Minneapolis. I kind of doubt they'll give it a second glance, as it's an image and not actually words, but I included an explanation of what the attempt was supposed to achieve.
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I honestly hadn't thought about the black and white clothes. I thought about the "lines".
i love this.
i love that it's got no words, but you can still sense a narrative.
This does a really nice job of bridging the gap between art and poetry.
I also think it is great. It even iambs and trochees visually. Did the mag ever respond?
This is yet another example of how I never kept a list of the fantastic tasks that I wanted to vote for during IE, but ran out of votes.
It's also an example of how some tasks have been done so well that it's almost impossible to attempt to create something new using the same parameters.
Oh, I don't know about that, Anna One. Although certain completions really do set a standard, I think that there's always room to pump new plasma into even the most popularly completed tasks. Look at Player Photograph, for example. I'm constantly amazed.
This is fantastic! And, dare I ask - black and white clothes and paint since you're the text? Here's hoping Speakeasy does give it a second look.