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Night Photography by steve rules, kristin gish

April 26th, 2008 6:15 PM

INSTRUCTIONS: Explore your neighborhood in deepest, darkest night.

Share photographs and other impressions of your exploration.

We make the trek from Kristin's house to the local store quite often, for food or wine or something, and these pictures reflect what we see every time we do this. We don't usually stop and take this many pictures though, and it was nice to see things in a different way. The clock tower is close enough to Kristin's house that you can hear it go off every hour, which is a gentle reminder of the passage of time. The Schaumburg public library has some excellent architecture for a simple library, and while not all of the interesting facets are shown here, I think we've captured the feel of the place at night fairly well. And the picture of the wine, so close and yet so far away, is one of the saddest pictures ever taken.

- Steve Rules, Master Haiku-ist.


I hope you were not expecting graveyards or run down cars.

- Kristin Gish, Master Haiku-ist.




Note: As far as the pictures go, even when split among two people writing 33 haiku's is quite a task. So if they're not all great, we apologize.

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IX

IX

I thought flowers closed // Late at night like liquor stores // Kristin knew better //


I

I

America's flag // Compare it to Mozambique's // It's pretty boring //


II

II

Capture and contain // Moment by moment of us // Your parameters //


III

III

Hi there how are you // We're doing just fine thank you // Need help? No? Okay //


IV

IV

To contain within // Things to make you want to spend // All of your money //


V

V

Isn't she pretty // Isn't she so wonderful // Metal Creation. //


VI

VI

Signifying him // As provider and ruler // For us to admire //


VII

VII

We hold hands gently // And we dance in the nighttime // For everyone //


VIII

VIII

Flowers in the dark // Must be hungry; they can't do // Photosynthesis //


X

X

Mystery picture // An underlit enigma // Hint: it's a flower //


XI

XI

The park benches wait // At night they seem lonely, so // We sat on one. Nice. //


XII

XII

Oh light from above // Could you tell me which way's home? // I seem to be drunk. //


XIII

XIII

STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. // STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. // STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP. // Haiku by: Stop Sign.


XIV

XIV

A parking lot rests // Does it feel the burden of // The cars that park there? //


XV

XV

A crack starts so small // But soon it spreads. And some day, // The parking lot crumbles. //


XVI

XVI

Seems a distant cliff, // Or the edge of a pit with // No bottom. Just pond. //


XVII

XVII

At night, things take shape // Looking different than day // Don't trip on a step //


XVIII

XVIII

The window reflects // Distorts, things seem transparent // A mirror has truth //


XIX

XIX

This narrow alley // Oh so artfully captured // I'm very modest //


XX

XX

Previously play // Ice cream and soda in day // And at nighttime, closed. //


XXI

XXI

A cold lake at night // Man made, artificial, fake // But still dangerous //


XXII

XXII

Here I am, meter. // I stand and stay day by day // Slim and faded red. //


XXIII

XXIII

To reach another // Is within reach and out of // Between glass and hours. //


XXIV

XXIV

The container of // Millions of lines of knowledge // Closed and brightly lit. //


XXV

XXV

To receive for you // Written words bound and copied // For all the masses //


XXVI

XXVI

The library is full // Of books, magazines and movies // The internet too //


XXVII

XXVII

So its bright inside // But closed for now til morning // Sit and wait til then. //


XXVIII

XXVIII

At night its empty // I could pretend that it's mine // But then morning comes //


XXIX

XXIX

Dentistry is 3... // Been doing haikus too long // I see syllables //


XXX

XXX

Night is time for sleep? // Who's been spreading all these lies? // I want to go out. //


XXXI

XXXI

All locked up? You sure? // Can't you just free one of them? // I've been good all day! //


XXXII

XXXII

This morning this man // Made breakfast for me as I // Played video games. //


XXXIII

XXXIII

What a champion // Beware; I've seen it first hand // This lady does bite //


XXXIV

XXXIV

FIN. Thank you



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posted by Jellybean of Thark on April 26th, 2008 7:30 PM

Wha-!

Look at that!

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posted by kristin gish on April 26th, 2008 9:39 PM

Wha-!

Wha-?

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posted by Jellybean of Thark on April 27th, 2008 11:08 PM

Why your wonderfully haiku'd praxis.

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posted by kristin gish on April 28th, 2008 3:07 PM

well. thank you sir.

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posted by Celina on April 26th, 2008 9:49 PM

Wow, what kind of camera did you take these pictures with? Were they really developed with those scalloped edges?

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posted by kristin gish on April 26th, 2008 11:01 PM

tisk tisk. superheroes cannot reveal such things!

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posted by Julian Muffinbot on April 27th, 2008 12:08 AM

love the haiku by the stop sign.