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Ouroboros by Pixie, Ty Ødin
October 25th, 2011 1:16 PMOne day to me the 'Great Drive' said
"it's time to task! Just go ahead"
And to it's prompting I replied
"For which task's sake will I revive"
Great Drive merrily flew away
but a spark was put in me that day
so to the list of tasks I sought
a mission truly fun and well wrought
This very task did catch my eye
and then I took it with a sigh
for though I knew not what i'd do
my heart was racing through and though
So simple a concept and quite concise
yet oxymoronic with a touch of spice
I pondered awhile at how to achieve
the counterintuitive task before me
The it came, in a flash and a skip
inspiration, sensation and color and flip!
I felt almost a God creating myself
temporal, colorful, bad for my own health
So to HEB I ventured with speed
to get the food coloring I knew I would need

and in a process taking almost a day

we created a rainbow and froze it away

we marveled in beauty at it's lovely hues
then left it to melt in a puddle of goo
left on it's own, it decayed
and black colored water was all that remained

A lesson to gods of the future and past
if it's made to be flawed, don't hope it will last
(Idea and write up by Pixie,
Logistical assistance and freezer privileges by Ty)
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posted by Pixie on October 26th, 2011 9:19 AM
The water it made by melting made it melt faster. Even if it wasn't the only thing at work, it was helping in destroying itself. When put in an environment without interference of any kind, it died. That was good enough for me.
I challenge someone on this site to create something that destroys itself with absolutely no external catalyst. I will be very impressed and vote five.
posted by rongo rongo on November 7th, 2011 5:45 PM
I think that it's more than the melting - the colors, because they were bright, when left to their own devices mixed themselves into a black non-color.
But the external room temperature destroyed it didn't it? It didn't bust itself!