15 + 8 points
Observation by saille is planting praxis
November 7th, 2008 12:54 PM
Dammit, Jim, I'm a photographer, not a poet.
4:40-5:10pm October 31, 2008.
Small park with a picnic table along Main Street. Looking for a quiet moment to reflect on the holiday, my observation accidentally coincided with neighborhood trick-or-treating.
As for the form, I wanted to avoid another stream-of-consciousness prose narrative, and instead chose a poetic form suited for very quick writing.
I forgot I was awful at it. Still, it is my observation, and I will transcribe the least terrible:
4:40-5:10pm October 31, 2008.
Small park with a picnic table along Main Street. Looking for a quiet moment to reflect on the holiday, my observation accidentally coincided with neighborhood trick-or-treating.
As for the form, I wanted to avoid another stream-of-consciousness prose narrative, and instead chose a poetic form suited for very quick writing.
I forgot I was awful at it. Still, it is my observation, and I will transcribe the least terrible:
| Sunset, All Hallow's dress up our fears and mock them. death, as a toddler. ignoring our games chill breeze rolls off the river an unquiet ghost. |



















I think I'm falling in love with you... :p Poetry and a Star Trek reference? *swoon*