Anybody Want a Peanut? by teucer
February 29th, 2008 3:08 PM


JJason, in his completion of this task, asserted that rhyming pictures can be thought of having two meanings - those with rhyming content, and those with similar appearances visually. Personally, I regard the second category as far more interesting; the other is just "document the fact that some nouns rhyme in your native language."
So I took a walk one evening on Nicollet Mall in Minneapolis. For those that wonder about such things, I went north the entire length of the mall, taking pictures of anything visually striking along the way. I included a photo of every northbound bus shelter for the entire length of the mall. I permitted myself to go in directions other than due north, but I never went south or otherwise backtracked. Part of the time I was outside; part of the time I was inside the skyway system.
These twelve pictures are presented in chronological - and thus geographical - order. They're also arranged into quatrains. Each quatrain has the rhyme scheme:
ab
ba
One thing I noticed about putting them into the quatrains is how the rhyme calls attention to other similarities - for example, by including two storefronts with rectangular signs for the stores prominently featured (despite the differing composition of the rest of the pictures), I also find myself noticing the fact that they both represent large organizations which provide a service that makes you feel good, costs money, and ultimately isn't the healthiest in the world.
I should mention that, similar as they may look, no two of these pictures include images of the same items. The bus stops in the "a" photos of the last quatrain, in particular, are practically identical - making the visual similarity and thus the "rhyme" particularly strong.
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I really like this, Doktor! The only thing I can say is that I want to see MORE pictures fitted into this idea. I also really love how you actually were able to come up with a chrono/geographical arrangement that still had such a very strong rhyme scheme. Excellent work, sir!
Rhyming names is a good concept, but it feels different from the sorts of pictures Eleanor took that inspired the task, so it doesn't feel right for this. It also has a lot of potential.
EDIT: Oh, and JTony - this is less than half the pictures I took, but most of them either didn't come out very well (and were discarded) or didn't fit the rhyming thing as well as I wanted for this completion (and thus went into Night Photography instead, if they did a good enough job of expressing my impression of the area).
While I don't agree that the 'rhyming names' concept isn't a good one, I do agree that the 'thematically themed' concept is a good one. (I did it myself, for Sonnet Desinee) But I like this praxis.